Use Nouns and Verbs Not Adjectives and Adverbs
"Write with nouns and verbs,
not with adjectives and adverbs. The adjective hasn't been built
that can pull a weak or inaccurate noun out of a tight place. . .
.it is nouns and verbs, not their assistants, that give to good
writing its toughness and color." —E.B. White from the book,
Elements of Style.
Often, we hope to replace our
weakness in the use of verbs and nouns by applying fancy
adjectives and adverbs. Think of it this way: if we need to show a
person is home late it is better to say, "He snuck in" or
"He crept in" or "He tiptoed in" than it is to say
"He walked in quietly (sneakily . . .etc.)
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