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Catherine's story explores the lives of immigrant women in Vancouver.

 
A Single Wife
by Catherine

“I rose to his bait.” Judy said, turning her face to the window.

“Really? You think so?” I murmured, but couldn’t find a word to comfort her.

We sat in a Starbucks at Aberdeen Center, the biggest Chinese shopping mall in Vancouver. Customers came in and out, talking and laughing. Most of them spoke Chinese. I enjoyed the smell of coffee and the familiar sound of the language.

I had known Judy for more than ten years. She used to be the most beautiful girl at our university, but now she was like a flower after the rain.

Outside, it was still raining. The radio said it was the 29th rainy day in January, a new record. People called Vancouver the capital of rain; Chinese people called Vancouver the capital of unhappy housewives because so many women, like Judy, lived here with their children but without their husbands.

Judy had been a news reporter in China, but now she had become a typical unhappy housewife. Five years ago, she immigrated to Canada with her two daughters but her husband didn’t come with them. He said that when he earned more money he would come back.

“I didn’t want to immigrate. It was him. He persuaded me to immigrate. He said it would be good for our daughters. He promised me he would come as soon as possible!” Her eyes watered.

Actually, I could imagine what had happened. Her husband, Jiang, with a well-proportioned body and a pair of especially intense big eyes, was an owner of a big factory, and had become the target of many pretty girls.

“Maybe he is busy,” I lied.

“Busy with what? His lovers? Until now I hadn't realized that he'd set me up! He deliberately sends me to Canada. I am so fed up! I hate him!” She tried her best to stop the tears.

He hadn’t come to see them for a long time. Even I didn’t believe he had no time.

“Why didn't you leave him earlier if he doesn’t love you any more? You are only 32 years old. Everything could restart, right?”

I divorced my husband recently because I found he had been with other women.

“We are different, Lucy, although we are same age. You have a job, no child, and your English is better than mine. I need his money to support the house, the car, and our daughters.”

“Well, do you want to go back to China?” I asked.

“Yes, I would prefer to go back, but my children don’t want to, they love it here. What can I do? I’ll have to let things slide.” She gazed dreamily into the distance through the window, muttering to herself.

Gray, everything looked gray in the rain.

“Stay or leave?”

It is not only Judy’s question, but also many Chinese newcomers’.

“Di-Di, Di-Di.” Her cell phone sounded. She quickly picked it up and looked at the new message.

“Sorry, Lucy, I've got to go. My friend is waiting for me.” She looked down at the floor.

“That’s o.k. Go ahead. Have a good time,” I said.

“Why did she appear coy?” I wondered, “Does she have a new boyfriend?”

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