Last week, I wrote an essay, "Remembering Pierre" as a live
class demonstration. This week, the essay will be revised according to the
These are just some of the ways to make revisions to your writing. Next
week, bring writing to revise of your own.
"Tighten and clean your language." Peter Elbow in his book,
Writing with Power.
"Remove mistakes in grammar and usage." —Peter Elbow
some little introductions or clarifications that may make all the
difference in the world to a reader's staying with you or
not." —Peter Elbow