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Advanced Composition: Revising the Essay (Live Demonstration) 
October 12, 2000

Last week, I wrote an essay, "Remembering Pierre" as a live class demonstration. This week, the essay will be revised according to the following list.

These are just some of the ways to make revisions to your writing. Next week, bring writing to revise of your own.


"Tighten and clean your language." Peter Elbow in his book, Writing with Power.

"Remove mistakes in grammar and usage." —Peter Elbow


"Insert some little introductions or clarifications that may make all the difference in the world to a reader's staying with you or not."   —Peter Elbow



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