English 10: Sample Paragraphs
Paragraph Assignment (February 10): Write a
descriptive paragraph about some natural thing. Follow Jack London's
sentence length pattern
. (m, l, s, m, vl, m, s). Use personification and metaphor in this paragraph. (100-150
words) Short sentences are 6 or 7 or fewer. Medium is up to 20. Long is longer!
Teacher's Sample
Paragraph
Queen Elizabeth Park, filled with
the scent of pine and cedar, gives me much pleasure when I walk my dog. QE park, as the
neighbours call it, shines as a beautiful place to go: the lower reaches, which I prefer,
offers evergreens, a pond, and a stream. Tashi loves to sniff along the stream banks. When
we round the hill to the south side of the park, if were lucky that day, we catch
the sun as we walk into the wind on the crest, where fine views of Galiano Island and
Tsawassen await and the air smells like fresh line-dried laundry. Then, we head down the
steep hill amid the trees on the west side of the park, down to where the ground is marshy
and the ducks swim on a large pond. QE Park speaks softly when we are walking. Brad