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  Brad's Teacher Writing (June 24, 2001)
 

 
 

 The following paragraph demonstrates the use of extended metaphor. It was written during a class exercise in Advanced Composition. 

The Child Raising Road

     The road we take while raising our children is a hard one, complete with switchbacks, hairpin turns, and sudden detours. When my children were young, the switchbacks were fairly frequent. I remember toilet training was like going backwards at times. One day, I would think that my son (or daughter) had it all figured out and I would never see another diaper again. But no, that would turn into the day he or she had an "accident" while I was in the middle of grocery shopping. The twists and turns, like the mountain highway and its hairpins, never seem to end. It's like a curve ball in baseball in a way—the children will surprise you with a personal question about the human body, usually when you least expect it, or suddenly use a bad word you had no idea they even knew. The detours children take you on are interesting as well. My son struggles with his mathematics and I think he is nearly at the end of his road. Perhaps it is time he took a detour to the easier math course, something I've tried to help him avoid. At least I will be there to keep him company! Although the child raising road has many interesting and unexpected qualities, I wouldn't trade it for the world.

 

 

 

 

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