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Different Views of Freedom
An Ideal Kind of Freedom
William Stafford’s poem, “Freedom,”
contains many differences from our views on freedom. Unlike
Stafford, our group did not discuss luck. He says that freedom,
“is knowing that luck makes a difference,” but for some reason
we failed to note this important truth. Stafford, furthermore,
believes that “No leader is free; no follower is free”; however,
in our group most of us said that we were free, and only some
people, such as children or prisoners were not. According to
Stafford, however, almost no one is free. Finally, although
Stafford suggests that we “wake up about four in the morning” in
order to be free, our thinking is that this does not guarantee
freedom to us, but we do like this time of day and the way it
feels. Perhaps, he means it as metaphor and to remind us that
social pressure does not allow for ideal freedom. In conclusion,
our group’s opinions varied quite a bit from William Stafford’s
views, though, one thing is for sure, he made us think deeply
through his poem.
The poem, “Freedom,” by William Stafford
contains ideas about freedom in one way similar to, but mostly
different from my group’s ideas. For example, our group thought
freedom was being able to do what we wanted to do within the
law; similarly, Stafford says, “freedom is following a river” or
“not following a river,” which seems to mean doing as we wish.
However, Stafford and our group disagree about who has freedom.
Unlike Stafford, who believes, “No leader is free; no follower
is free,” and so almost no one is free, we, in our group,
thought that the majority of Canadians had freedom, except for a
few people. Furthermore, our group and Stafford do not agree
about how to get freedom. Although we felt we could obtain
freedom by choosing to live in a free country like Canada,
Stafford says, in contrast, that “we need to wake up about four
in the morning” in order to be free, since he believes others
influence our freedom, so we must avoid them to be free.
Finally, it became clear to us that Stafford mainly disagrees
with our thinking on freedom in his poem.
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