paragraph below was written for a topic in the
classes about what makes us angry.
One thing that makes me really angry is litterbugs. A litterbug
is a person who drops things on the ground, expecting someone
else to pick it up. All around my children's former elementary
school you can find candy wrappers, lunch bags and rotten fruit.
It's disgusting! Unfortunately, the children may not be forced
to pick up this mess because that job is reserved for the
unionized custodians. But, the custodians don't have much time
to clean up since we have had so many cutbacks to education
funding. The result is the boulevards around the school always
look untidy. I should add that the dog owners, seeing the mess
there, then feel free to leave their dog poops, too. It's really
a bad example to show the neighbourhood, a generally clean and
well-tended place. Inconsiderate people who litter is one of the
things that makes me angry! —146
words; following standard paragraph structure with a topic and
concluding sentence and title; by Brad Hyde, May 19, 2005.